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For the " Post Apocalypse Now" Challenge at
Level 3

Any suggestion and critic to improve this work is welcome I want to learn and improve my skills.

Credit photos :
Woman and girl :[link] by *mizzd-stock
Gas mask : [link] by ~XerStock
Dune : [link] by ~darkw0lf09stock
Wreck : [link] by *CAStock
Rusted beam : [link] by ~Angelrat-Stock
Wall : [link] by ~MJ84-StockPhotos
Centipede and texture on the wall : [link] by ~cyborgsuzystock
Bug on the rusted beam : [link] by ~indimew
Crack : [link] by ~korridan-stock
Cloud :[link] by ~ryoga-2003stock
Jean for the patch : [link] by ~garan-xp
Scar : [link] by ~stock-morfea
Burnt mark : [link] by ~sam-man
Smoke brushes : [link] by~miss69-stock and [link] by ~davethelurker
Hair brushes : [link] by ~trisste-brushes